EDIT: Embedding from SoundCloud is officially fucked.
Lyrics:
Go in, like my dick is, when I get wit all y'all bitches. She just wishin' I don't finish, make her fidget when I'm dickin'. Mini Me is on a mission, make her throw a white flag, give in. She surrender to the kingpin, if there was a hook, I'd have her singin'. Hit it from the back, gettin' lit up in the sack. She addicted to me, 'cause I spit that crack. Gave me a double tap as appreciation, fuck clappin', get standin'. Ovation, for the sensation I gave her ovaries, just like an accent. I ain't savin' hoes, I'm such a villain, I be killin' clit. Ragin' Cajun baby, I just do it for the thrill of it. Ragin' Rapids Captain, got her drizzlin' from from her gills and fins. Filet Mignon, wit an extra side of sizzlin' fish. Im'ma have her grillin' quick, 'specially when I'm drillin' dick. Im'ma make her fillins drip, she love it when I fill dat slit. Then I tell her split them hips and dip inside the hole that shits. Super sleazy shit, like that bitch that made Tok Tik. Ooops, I mean Tik Tok, ha, I'm fuckin' twisted. Don't even know what I'm on, I could possibly be lifted. Go hit up ya friends and kin, and tell 'em 'bout the gift I give. Ya brethren's miss, yo little sis, fuck it, even yo cousins. Tell her that it's Christmas, she the Vixen of the sleigh ride. Blitzen, I tackle dat pussy, tell her that it's game time. Tell her I love her, and dump her, fuck her in the same night. Rappin' 'bout the actions, and I'll snatch her wit the same lines.
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EDIT: Embedding from SoundCloud is officially fucked.
awful. one of your worse.
Lol, like that means anything to me based on your ignorance you just showed in the Floats My Boat thread.
Remember that next time I say I like one of your beats. Do you want me to be honest or not? Because you gotta admit that I typically say I like about 30-40% of your tunes. I would think that if someone likes some of my beats, then that is more of an opinion that has meaning as opposed to someone who hates everything you do.
I dont think you are talentless. I do think you can make decent rap songs. That Sleazy song was shit though. Really awful song. I found nothing redeeming about it which is unusal for your tracks.
Actually I shouldn't say 1,000 Ways To Die is done, because I wanna rewrite it, the original was like.......gore and dark ass lyrics, and that's not my style anymore and doesn't fit the rest of the mixtape at all. But it's gonna be the one track on the mixtape that was produced by me. I went too fucking in on that beat, so proud of it.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
And there are so many other lyrical content that I would probably like, but you never go there. You like to keep most of your raps in the "im so awesome my shit dont stink" bucket, and occasionally you bust out an emo track.
I've said this before and I'll say it again now.... What about rapping about shit that is real to life, or real to the world, that isnt about YOU. I'd think you of all people having come from a metal background would have picked up on some of these heavier themes that is so abundant in metal but so lacking in rap. How about writing about
Suicide War Political strife Teen Angst Murdering someone in a serial killer sort of way
Idk... shit like that! Be creative man.... Think outside the box. You have all the tools to work with something like this, but you're too afraid to step outside of your imaginary box you've created for yourself.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
Actually I shouldn't say 1,000 Ways To Die is done, because I wanna rewrite it, the original was like.......gore and dark ass lyrics, and that's not my style anymore and doesn't fit the rest of the mixtape at all. But it's gonna be the one track on the mixtape that was produced by me. I went too fucking in on that beat, so proud of it.
Yeah here is another one that when you first posted I think I said I liked it. And if I didnt say anything, then yeah I like this rap a lot! I wish you'd write more shit like this.
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Lyrics:
Go in, like my dick is, when I get wit all y'all bitches.
She just wishin' I don't finish, make her fidget when I'm dickin'.
Mini Me is on a mission, make her throw a white flag, give in.
She surrender to the kingpin, if there was a hook, I'd have her singin'.
Hit it from the back, gettin' lit up in the sack.
She addicted to me, 'cause I spit that crack.
Gave me a double tap as appreciation, fuck clappin', get standin'.
Ovation, for the sensation I gave her ovaries, just like an accent.
I ain't savin' hoes, I'm such a villain, I be killin' clit.
Ragin' Cajun baby, I just do it for the thrill of it.
Ragin' Rapids Captain, got her drizzlin' from from her gills and fins.
Filet Mignon, wit an extra side of sizzlin' fish.
Im'ma have her grillin' quick, 'specially when I'm drillin' dick.
Im'ma make her fillins drip, she love it when I fill dat slit.
Then I tell her split them hips and dip inside the hole that shits.
Super sleazy shit, like that bitch that made Tok Tik.
Ooops, I mean Tik Tok, ha, I'm fuckin' twisted.
Don't even know what I'm on, I could possibly be lifted.
Go hit up ya friends and kin, and tell 'em 'bout the gift I give.
Ya brethren's miss, yo little sis, fuck it, even yo cousins.
Tell her that it's Christmas, she the Vixen of the sleigh ride.
Blitzen, I tackle dat pussy, tell her that it's game time.
Tell her I love her, and dump her, fuck her in the same night.
Rappin' 'bout the actions, and I'll snatch her wit the same lines.
Like in this:
Anyways, you said you liked it, thanks.
In any case, keep it up! \m/
I dont think you are talentless. I do think you can make decent rap songs. That Sleazy song was shit though. Really awful song. I found nothing redeeming about it which is unusal for your tracks.
#1: Good Evening (Finished.)
#2: Y'all Don't Hear Me Tho (Finished)
#3: Bonfire (Finished)
#4: 100 Hunnit (Finished)
#5: 1,000 Ways To Die (Feat. Mikey Dolla) [Prod. By Episode 95] (Finished)
#6: Unveil The Angels (Feat. Jamie Cross) (Finished)
#7: Blue Sky (Feat. Jasmine L.)
#8: Strange Clouds (Feat. Jamie Cross)
#9: Unveil The Demons (Finished)
#10: Doin' Fine [Prod. By Moorebid]
#11: E.P.I.S.O.D.E. [Prod. By Moorebid]
#12: Crew Love (Feat. Mikey Dolla And Moorebid) (Finished)
#Bonus Track: Dat Ass Freestyle (Finished)
I've said this before and I'll say it again now.... What about rapping about shit that is real to life, or real to the world, that isnt about YOU. I'd think you of all people having come from a metal background would have picked up on some of these heavier themes that is so abundant in metal but so lacking in rap. How about writing about
Suicide
War
Political strife
Teen Angst
Murdering someone in a serial killer sort of way
Idk... shit like that! Be creative man.... Think outside the box. You have all the tools to work with something like this, but you're too afraid to step outside of your imaginary box you've created for yourself.