You know Erik I went back and listened to all your soundcloud songs and after a few listens I like this song more than I did at first listen. I still think the wordplay and rhymes werent as strong as some of your others (The first couple lines of your 6 Foot 7 Foot flow are absolutely killer honestly) but like I said before your flow is starting to get better. Your voice sounds very smooth as well, its definitely your cleanest sounding song. 11/10
Except I didn't talk about weed. Guess you didn't comprehend what I was going for in the last verse.
Lol, don't kid yourself I guess I started skimming that. Life is the drug, wow metaphor. But why do you want to enjoy life by the brick if you're so misanthropic and cynical?
Why is rap so self obsessed? Some clever lines, but you are just bragging. It's like this pretty much covers all bases between haters, weed, and how you hate everything too, you need to save stuff to rap about lol. I'm getting a total, "you suck, I rule," vibe and I just cain't flow to it. Or maybe it's the shitty beat, you need to sample this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3flYZ6LOsw I'd listen the hell out of that.
Holy fuck this is funky.
the nba jam bassline!
Hell yeah, it's so funky you can't help but move.
The first part was actually referring to how bad I want success in Music.
And thanks Todd. \m/
You need to clarify then, dude, there is nothing in that stanza that would lead me to believe you were talking about music, but you do however say "a gram of this life."
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edited June 2011
I think it is funny a rapper calls himself tech n9ne. Funny because the Tech-9 is a really shitty gun that jams more often then it fires. The Tech-9 does look awesome, but anyone whose ever fired one knows what a piece of shit it is. A cobray Mac-11 is ten times the gun the Tech-9 was. (I own a Mac-11 with a screw on flash suppressor. The gun is sweet \m/ )
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