IT IS FINALLY DONE. (New flow - Sandwitches beat.)

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And you guys are fucking retarded, I say I don't give a fuck one time at the very end and you act like that's all the song is about.

NolaFree810

i think your little rap was good until the last verse which is just juvenile and dumb

Brian

We're saying that if you go out of your way to make every line about you not giving a fuck it makes you seem kind of silly. You just don't wanna look stupid if you're trying to market your shit.

rammstein516

Erik if you want a sick beat, sample this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=92HMQRFIM-E

Still one of the few rap songs I really enjoy.

New Jack in the house.

Brian

Mhmmmm

Necrothulhu

And you guys are fucking retarded, I say I don't give a fuck one time at the very end and you act like that's all the song is about.

You've been guilty of the same thing...except it wasn't songs being discussed but other thangs

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Except every line WASN'T about me not giving a fuck. There was one single line the entire song.

And the ending was just a play on the original lyrics.

Uhh, Free Earl, that's the fucking shit, and if you disagree, suck a couple pimple covered dicks.
Umm, Wolf Gang, that's the fucking clique.
Golf Wang, Kill 'Em All, Nigguh Triple Six. Fuck 2DopeBoyz, all them nigguhs bitches, we don't y'all, The Fader's who we really fuckin' with.

NolaFree810

the rap is good but the ending makes you sound like a little rage filled teenager and i think loses your credibility of a legit rapper to some kid saying fuckwords

Rex_Capone420

to many fucks and faggets....try writing something that has some depth

Brian

I'm under the impression that in a "flow", everything is supposed to connect. Which means you say you don't care about the haters, you tell them why and how you're so great, then you relate it back and essentially say SO YEAH FUCK YOU in the final verse.

Necrothulhu

So you took a wolf gang song and changed the lyrics?

Brian

to many fucks and faggets....try writing something that has some depth

Yeah there was a major overuse of faggot and some people might not be too thrilled about that.

Mike

Sounded in the second verse like you were running out of breath here and there. Other than that, not too bad.

Necrothulhu

Eminem got mad shit for that back in the day. Had to go to court n shit too. Also...idk how people would feel about a 15 year old telling listeners to suck his dick

Brian

Eminem got mad shit for that back in the day. Had to go to court n shit too. Also...idk how people would feel about a 15 year old telling listeners to suck his dick

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the rap is good but the ending makes you sound like a little rage filled teenager and i think loses your credibility of a legit rapper to some kid saying fuckwords

Yet the rest of the song doesn't? LOL OK. I even said "Angry white suburban kid.".

So you took a wolf gang song and changed the lyrics?

Well it's a Tyler beat, yes. Those last 5 or so lines are just a play on the original song's ending, which I posted.

to many fucks and faggets....try writing something that has some depth

Yeah there was a major overuse of faggot and some people might not be too thrilled about that.

And yet I don't give a fuck. I don't care who it pisses off. Part of what I meant by "I don't give a fuck, if you hate me for this.".

And it does have depth, write something better yourself, trailer trash.

Necrothulhu

What would you do if someone sued you over it?

Brian

And yet I don't give a fuck. I don't care who it pisses off. Part of what I meant by "I don't give a fuck, if you hate me for this.".

I guess

Brian

What would you do if someone sued you over it?

"How do you plead?"

"I don't give a FUCK"

MarcTheFallen

So what label you going to send these to? No real hip hop label would pick this up at all.

I guess Psychopath and whatever scene labels there are.