WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
That was actually surprisingly good. I'm not into rap so I dont know how that really compares to other shit out there.... but it was very eminem sounding (which I think is a good thing)
Finishing 6 Foot 7 Foot today, but here's a sample verse, one of seven.
I'm on that 6 foot, 7 foot, 8 foot swag. I've already earned my stripes, now Im'ma go and wave my flag. Man you claim to be a goon, and you claim to be a goblin. Keep running your poultry mouth, all I really hear is gobblin'. I'm a beast, I'm a monster, I am thee abomination. Im'ma take that fucking flag and Im'ma run my fucking nation. Salivation, at the mouths, of these rabid fucking haters. Im'ma help you save some face, here's some fucking Now And Laters. Just to make you eat your words, I'm flying high just like a bird. And you just keep on throwing stones, but your aim and goals are pretty low, haha.
ONE MORE FUCKING VERSE TO GO. I've been slacking, but it'll be finished tomorrow for sure. Here's one more sample verse.
Now in this shameless game of quitters, I'm still smokin' like a Swisher, I spit that fire just like a Zippo, I lock you down just like that Indo. And then I'm gone right out the window, See, 'cause that's just how I do, I'm on that catastrophic level, I'm even sicker than the flu. Even sicker than pneumonia, and no, I will not console ya, See, 'cause I be going hammer, I shut you down just like the slammer, I get out of jail free, yo, my past is pretty sloppy, Now I run the fucking game, I'm on board, call it Monopoly. But yo, this ain't child's play, this is the fuckin' game of life, And I'm married to this shit, she's my best friend, also my wife. And I think I'll say it twice, just how much I love the beat, I'd be dead without this Music, date of expiration on my feet.
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Still waiting.
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I'm on that 6 foot, 7 foot, 8 foot swag.
I've already earned my stripes, now Im'ma go and wave my flag.
Man you claim to be a goon, and you claim to be a goblin.
Keep running your poultry mouth, all I really hear is gobblin'.
I'm a beast, I'm a monster, I am thee abomination.
Im'ma take that fucking flag and Im'ma run my fucking nation.
Salivation, at the mouths, of these rabid fucking haters.
Im'ma help you save some face, here's some fucking Now And Laters.
Just to make you eat your words, I'm flying high just like a bird.
And you just keep on throwing stones, but your aim and goals are pretty low, haha.
Now in this shameless game of quitters,
I'm still smokin' like a Swisher,
I spit that fire just like a Zippo,
I lock you down just like that Indo.
And then I'm gone right out the window,
See, 'cause that's just how I do,
I'm on that catastrophic level, I'm even sicker than the flu.
Even sicker than pneumonia, and no, I will not console ya,
See, 'cause I be going hammer, I shut you down just like the slammer,
I get out of jail free, yo, my past is pretty sloppy,
Now I run the fucking game, I'm on board, call it Monopoly.
But yo, this ain't child's play, this is the fuckin' game of life,
And I'm married to this shit, she's my best friend, also my wife.
And I think I'll say it twice, just how much I love the beat,
I'd be dead without this Music, date of expiration on my feet.
And thank you Jobe, I'm really proud of that verse. There are a lot more metaphors and shit thrown in throughout the entire song.