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MAH FLOW IZ SICK. (6 FOOT 7 FOOT FREESTYLE FINALLY DONE.)
Lol, just did another Rap. Just took me 3 hours, and I'm really proud of this one, please check it out. Used Wiz Khalifa's "On My Level.".
On My Level Freestyle by ErikBehemoth1357
On My Level Freestyle by ErikBehemoth1357
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But fanx. >:D<
I actually attempted 6 Foot 7 Foot earlier, but it's extremely difficult to flow to that.
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From Those Fishes - I Fingered An Old Bitch (i got Aids on my finger)
Not a fan of the "haters" line, but I hate that word in general. cwutididthere
You rollin' with the greatest, not fuckin' with the fakest.
I roll on up, I show 'em up, and that's on daily basis.
Yea, face it, I'm on my level, getting overtime in, I've been silent for a while, so I think it's time that I chime in.
I'm shinin', the finest trees I'm grindin'. you slowed your role, but on I go, but I still don't need diamonds.
I'm flyin', no wings, no limits, and not a bit of hesitation, as I'm floatin' through the sky, I'm on a trip, not a vacation.
Got no reservations, I'll go wherever life takes me, and try to alter the course 'til this fuckin' life breaks me.
And everything I do is for a motherfuckin' reason, Get off of the field, this ain't your motherfuckin' season.
And if you really think that this is just a waste of time, all I ever wanted to do was sit back and write a rhyme, all I ever really had was some flow and some inspiration, and you haters fueled the fire, I didn't need no instigation.
I'm headin' straight for the top, I have the ultimate goal, I wanna see your jaw drop, I wanna hear your heart stop, I wanna watch your nose bleed.
While I mock you from up here, and go and take the winner's seat.
See, 'cause I'm a winner B, I have what it takes to succeed.
I'll just rest my foot on the pedal while I'm restin' in the lead.
I do a lot of dirty deeds, I'm not too sure what it really means, but just come watch me grow while I go and I plant my fucking seed.
Yo, they treat me like a beast, so I think it's time that I feast.
On these bitches in the sheets, while I kill it on the beat.
We'll do this on my terms, we'll fuck BEFORE we meet.
Yo, I heard she was a freak, but the parents she won't meet.
Yo, I won't accept defeat, I've been at it for 3 weeks.
No, switch it to 3 months, now up it to 3 years.
You better listen the fuck up and take the shit up out your ears.
I thought I made it very clear, I am your worst fucking fear.
Man, everybody wanna be a fucking judge, well you can hate me all you want, but my opinion still won't budge.
And I just do not give a fuck, I probably do not give enough, I'll take whatever I can grab, and you just can not have it back.
I'll spit a couple more bars, just to finish up this track.
I am demanding my respect, I think it's time I got it back.
It won't be fuckin' long before I'm heard around the map.
This is the end, of that motherfucking lyrical attack, fuck it...
Your raps was alright, but perfect it was less than
Like stop lights with no power at the intersection
Your flow lacks all logical direction
Pick a topic and stay in the lane
Dress up you flow so it isn't so plain
Your simple raps are straight up killing me
Look up the meaning of the word simile
And while we're fixing this flow of yours
You need to beef up on some metaphors
Step it up, take it to another level
No I'm not clowning on the lil devil
But come on man lets face it,
those rhymes were pretty basic
I'm higher than a kite and dropping shit like a pigeon
What are the odds that's he's gonna listen?
Because I'm 'sposed to be perfect on my second ever Rap song, makes sense.
Anyways, thank you everyone else.
Or give some criticism to make your shit tighter?
Song is ok but the genre is wrong
Its structured more like a metal song
Rap is more influenced by clever word play
And similes and metaphors are needed all day
these are all tips to help you get better
But of you choose to get pissy then whatever
If I was dissing you you'd fucking know it
Peep the knowledge and if you reap it you can sow it