Because I'm 'sposed to be perfect on my second ever Rap song, makes sense.
Anyways, thank you everyone else.
Would you rather me blow smoke up your ass like a dick rider Or give some criticism to make your shit tighter? Song is ok but the genre is wrong Its structured more like a metal song Rap is more influenced by clever word play And similes and metaphors are needed all day these are all tips to help you get better But of you choose to get pissy then whatever If I was dissing you you'd fucking know it Peep the knowledge and if you reap it you can sow it
Jobe.
Are you serious? This cracker is delirious! Riding the dick of one decent- ass lyricist? Let me fix your flow too, Its ok I insist.
You keep talking about how this guys lacking flow, I'm just trying to help his style grow similes, and metaphors like it's a fucking kid's show. If I make it look too easy its cuz I'm a wiz yo Rap starts at the heart, Niggas say what they feel Your style sucks and that's just keeping it real It is not like they're trying to pass an English class all day Most are sellings drugs in the project hallway Smoking blunts ans rockin Biggie all day Study the words of a lryicist and learn the way You say you're as high as a kite, Erik's a skyscraper Compton ass Bitch my flow will rape ya Absurd, try a little harder next time, maybe you'll do good, instead of sounding like some dumbass faggot who wishes he could. I'm going platinum and your flow is gonna go wood True story. El em ay oh Next time hit harder than that gay flow
You think you can rap, but you can't do shit Your flow's about as smooth as a knife on a clit You've all got limited vocabulary I'm vomiting involuntarily All because I'm sitting here and reading this bullshit You suck dick Plus your words ain't shit You wanna talk about some faggotry Go recheck your anatomy You're douchebags and tame And this genre is lame Your rhymes are meaningless now, for you just lost the game.
TUPAC IS DEAD/THE LEGEND IS GONE/THEY SAYIN TUPAC'S BACK?/DEM NIGGAS WRONG
Because I'm 'sposed to be perfect on my second ever Rap song, makes sense.
Anyways, thank you everyone else.
Would you rather me blow smoke up your ass like a dick rider Or give some criticism to make your shit tighter? Song is ok but the genre is wrong Its structured more like a metal song Rap is more influenced by clever word play And similes and metaphors are needed all day these are all tips to help you get better But of you choose to get pissy then whatever If I was dissing you you'd fucking know it Peep the knowledge and if you reap it you can sow it
Jobe.
Are you serious? This cracker is delirious! Riding the dick of one decent- ass lyricist? Let me fix your flow too, Its ok I insist.
You keep talking about how this guys lacking flow, I'm just trying to help his style grow similes, and metaphors like it's a fucking kid's show. If I make it look too easy its cuz I'm a wiz yo Rap starts at the heart, Niggas say what they feel Your style sucks and that's just keeping it real It is not like they're trying to pass an English class all day Most are sellings drugs in the project hallway Smoking blunts ans rockin Biggie all day Study the words of a lryicist and learn the way You say you're as high as a kite, Erik's a skyscraper Compton ass Bitch my flow will rape ya Absurd, try a little harder next time, maybe you'll do good, instead of sounding like some dumbass faggot who wishes he could. I'm going platinum and your flow is gonna go wood True story. El em ay oh Next time hit harder than that gay flow
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Run along and get ghost kid.
You think you can rap, but you can't do shit
Your flow's about as smooth as a knife on a clit
You've all got limited vocabulary
I'm vomiting involuntarily
All because I'm sitting here and reading this bullshit
You suck dick
Plus your words ain't shit
You wanna talk about some faggotry
Go recheck your anatomy
You're douchebags and tame
And this genre is lame
Your rhymes are meaningless now, for you just lost the game.
True story though.