New Song UP (Metal-core / Groove / rock)

DeceasedFantasy

Made a new song. Im sending it in to Musicians institute which is this music school in Los angelos To try and get accepted.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=937XJvbiOG4


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=937XJvbiOG4

ProdigalSon

Not bad

Travis

Not bad

FUCKYOUFAGGOTHATERHOPOFFMYCOCKITSMYDREAM!!!!!!!!!

DeceasedFantasy

Not bad

FUCKYOUFAGGOTHATERHOPOFFMYCOCKITSMYDREAM!!!!!!!!!

SayWHat?

Travis

Not bad

FUCKYOUFAGGOTHATERHOPOFFMYCOCKITSMYDREAM!!!!!!!!!

SayWHat?

DeceasedFantasy

why did you say it was your dream/?

Travis

why did you say it was your dream/?

shit son, go read some 'erik threads' and get back to me...........and the song is pretty good....

DeceasedFantasy

oh. no haha i dont really have time to read threads i only go on here to get feed back from my music,

mrAPE

So you're using us?

DeceasedFantasy

well im not makeing any of you listen to my song so its not rape

Travis

oh. no haha i dont really have time to read threads i only go on here to get feed back from my music,

Shoo fly, don't bother me......

mrAPE

I don't like being used

Travis

I don't like being used

DeceasedFantasy

ape... why do you even open my threads you have said you dont like me before so what are you doing on my thread than?

Travis

where's Gulch?

DeceasedFantasy

idk last time i chatted with him was on fb

FIRENATHANIELHACKETT

0/10 wouldnt listen again

DeceasedFantasy

0/10 wouldnt listen again

haha ok do you have any songs you recorded that i can hear?

FIRENATHANIELHACKETT

How is that correlated with the fact that this song is awful

DeceasedFantasy

How is that correlated with the fact that this song is awful

if the song is so awful lets hear something you have written cause i bet you couldn't write something better ...you probably cant even write music can you . thats why you say its awful its cause your just jealous

MenAreTrash

How old are you? Because you're handling criticism pretty poorly.

I think it's decent, you could probably cut a little bit, because no Metalcore song needs to be 7.5 minutes long.