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A collection of my latest flows. (LOUD ADDED.)

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  • JormungandrJormungandr Posts: 1,971 juggalo
    edited August 2011
    Jorm, do you like Lil B? I saw that you favorited his video from Sweden a few weeks ago on YouTube.
    Well, I think he's hilarious and I like that he knows his brand of rap is outrageous. It's every cliche and normally bad aspect of rap (for example, repetitive pop hooks, constant "SWAG," mad vulgarity and disrespect to hoes) taken way to the extreme, and it's just so ridiculous that I don't think he's taking himself seriously.
  • monicaamonicaa Posts: 7,109 destroyer of motherfuckers
    lil b is so shitty haha
  • JormungandrJormungandr Posts: 1,971 juggalo
    edited August 2011
    Before you call him shitty, listen to this officially based freestyle and reconsider.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fl6Mf4yTm7A
  • EpisodeEpisode Posts: 32,049 destroyer of motherfuckers
    That was garbage. -_-

    What makes no sense with him is how he has this stupid shit like Like A Martian, and then shit from his actual album was all very deep and emotional, like Illusions Of Grandeur and I Hate Myself. His flow is still terrible either way, but the difference is night and day. Makes me think he did the Wonton Soup hoes on my dick SWAG SWAG SWAG bullshit simply to get noticed.
  • GuruGuru Posts: 2,089 juggalo
  • FLATFLAT Posts: 60,700 spicy boy
    All day long, do it like tony
  • EpisodeEpisode Posts: 32,049 destroyer of motherfuckers
    edited August 2011
    So, in my opinion, this is my realest track I've ever done so far. 3 minutes of straight flow, no hook, no stops, no bullshit. 5 pages full of bars for this.

    Episode 95 - Freaks And Geeks. (Remix.) by ErikBehemoth1357

    Lyrics:

    They said I would never make it.
    Determined to be the greatest.
    Said I wasn't real, but that's comin' from all the fuckin' fakest.
    They prosthetic, I got credit, look at all of my credentials.
    Dedicated my life, so I'm gon' prove that I got potential.
    They mental, to think that I would ever reach a deadline.
    Remember this loser when you see my name in the headlines.
    I'm just tryna shed some light, but you'll never hold a candle.
    To me, try on my shoes, let's see how much you can really handle.
    Tie 'em up, and lace 'em up, I wear a size eleven.
    Fuck your 9-5, I'm workin' 11-11.
    That's A.M. to A.M. and P.M. to P.M.
    The haters tried to blind me, I guess it worked, 'cause I can't see them.
    Out of sight, out of mind.
    I'm on a flight, I'm on my grind.
    I always shine, so fuck 'em all, I'm always gon' be gettin' mine.
    She's a dime, I'm talkin' 'bout this lovely lady, Music.
    She was always there, she had my back when I was 'bout to lose it.
    For all the trouble, I think I owe her somethin' in return.
    She gives me hope every day, I just gotta believe her.
    These suckas just don't see her, the way that I do.
    Paid the rent on my life just when I thought it was overdue.
    I'll never get over you.
    You'll always be in my heart.
    You'll be with me 'til the end, you was with me from the start.
    And I say this from my heart, you the only one I trust.
    Loved you right from birth, so you can trust that it was never lust.
    And the bond will never bust, matter fact, it's just beginnin'.
    Gotta succeed for you, so just remind me to keep on winnin'.
    I'm in this, for life, man, I'm never thinking twice.
    No second guesses, no lookin' back, not a doubt in my mind.
    Never lookin' behind, give a fuck about the past.
    Focused on my future from today until my very last.
    Put my fuckin' heart into it until I am heartless.
    Blowin' out my brain for this, and leavin' me so smart-less.
    You simply can't depart this, although I'm on a mission.
    Dedication shows, I always play my position.
    Never gonna lose, I have allergies to failure.
    Success is for the taking, I'm a greedy little taker.
    A Savior, I'm the only one who can set my life straight.
    Feast the fruits of labor, ayo homie, this is my plate.
    Music saved my life, I gotta show her some love.
    Always show my dedication, by rising up above.
    The odds, so homie, tell me, what are the odds?
    That I would take my throne, wear my gold crown, and sit among the Gods?
    A deity, I am preaching, this ain't divine intervention.
    Created masterpieces, take a look at all my inventions.
    Not to mention, I'm young, and I only got time to grow.
    I'll keep making my art until they call me Picasso.
    Until they call me Pablo, paint a picture of success.
    Yes, I am the greatest, won't settle for any less.
    Forget about all the rest, call it hater Alzheimers.
    They showin' major hate, but the effect on me is minor.
    Show me all your lighters, 'cause homie, I'm on fire.
    I am the shit like what you'd find up in your baby's diaper.
    I'm never gon' retire, it's holy matrimony.
    Music is my wife, now, I need a pastor, Tony.
    These suckas is bologna, I'm prime cut Filet Mignon.
    They spewin' out they bullshit, now it's time to get shit on.
    Climbin' up the steps, on the Stairway To Heaven.
    On my way to the high life, when I get there, I'll know, Led Zeppelin.
    Know I'm always reppin' what I love and support.
    Music always was my first, it was never a last resort.
    Don't bother tryna retort, don't bother tryin' to heckle me.
    My mind's already made up, I know that this is my destiny.
    This is the conclusion B, request you do not settle please.
    'Cause this is only an episode in my fuckin' legacy.
  • EpisodeEpisode Posts: 32,049 destroyer of motherfuckers
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  • JormungandrJormungandr Posts: 1,971 juggalo
    Erik, if anything I'm impressed that you can write that much lyrics on the same idea. I'm certainly a lot better at using my creativity musicwise rather than my shitty attempts to organize my thoughts into lyrics I'm satisfied with, so I know that takes quite a bit of effort.
  • JLRedWing13JLRedWing13 Posts: 48,736 mod
    Erik, if anything I'm impressed that you can write that much lyrics on the same idea. I'm certainly a lot better at using my creativity musicwise rather than my shitty attempts to organize my thoughts into lyrics I'm satisfied with, so I know that takes quite a bit of effort.
    Uh oh.
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  • EpisodeEpisode Posts: 32,049 destroyer of motherfuckers
    Why uh oh Jay? Am I 'sposed to get pissed at that?

    Anyways, thank you Jorm. It was definitely a lot more challenging to write, especially since it's so long with no breaks. Took about 3 hours to write. And at this point, I'd easily say I'm stronger lyrically than Musically, but I'm gradually learning production and working on a beat I really like.
  • Ace_Deputy_CheezeAce_Deputy_Cheeze Posts: 14,736 jayfacer
    Jays just tryin to start shit like always.
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  • JLRedWing13JLRedWing13 Posts: 48,736 mod
    Yup, that's me. The shit-starter.
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  • FLATFLAT Posts: 60,700 spicy boy
    Jaytheshitstarter13
  • NOCAPNOCAP Posts: 37,305 mod
    *Bumps "Jaycup Lawlymeier I heard you were talking shit bitch thread"*


  • AdamAdam Posts: 11,533 balls deep
    That was pretty sweet that beat ruled. And your lyrics improve with every rap you make.
  • EpisodeEpisode Posts: 32,049 destroyer of motherfuckers
    That was pretty sweet that beat ruled. And your lyrics improve with every rap you make.
    Thanks bro. \m/ And have you heard the original? Childish Gambino is so dope.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=otPxoVQiIGo

    He makes too many metaphors about his dick on this though, even though they're all pretty clever, he overdoes it, still sick though.
  • AdamAdam Posts: 11,533 balls deep
    That was pretty sweet that beat ruled. And your lyrics improve with every rap you make.
    Thanks bro. \m/ And have you heard the original? Childish Gambino is so dope.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=otPxoVQiIGo

    He makes too many metaphors about his dick on this though, even though they're all pretty clever, he overdoes it, still sick though.
    Imma check this out after i finishing listening to WTT. I didn't know that dude was a rapper he's a pretty funny dude.
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