FUCK YEA HERE WE GO. My first full song "Shattered Fragments Of Hope".

Necrothulhu

The vocals make my throat hurt...they're way too forced

KridesBrideBritt

The vocals make my throat hurt...they're way too forced

Agreed.

Razor_Shark

If Erik keeps trying to do vocals, he'll fuck up his voice.

Other than that it is pretty cool

SGNL_05

i think this would sound better....vocal wise





not trying to bash erik in anyway shape or form...but those vox just werent good.

Santana

Yeah make sure you don't strain your voice. Seems like you're using a lot of throat which you don't want to do
It sounds good IMO but you still have a lot of room to improve. Timing is a big issue and recording needs to be better but it's not bad

Brian

Yeah be careful with inhales. Your throat will get AIDS (or at least have serious problems)

Santana

^ he knows what's up brosef

JLRedWing13

... my cat ran away from me when I finally decided to play this... do not like.

I lol'ed.

MetalCoresades

not bad... not a huge fan of the vox, but not bad.

says ur from the illinois area. maybe ur band, n my band could jam sometime, lol.