FUCK YEA HERE WE GO. My first full song "Shattered Fragments Of Hope".

Episode

http://www.myspace.com/signalthemartyr Only song on the player.


Lyrics:
This is a call to arms, but I'm empty handed.
This is the time to stand and fight, we can't take shit for granted.

So I've been cast aside, another clone, another lie.
Another loss, this road I pave, I'm on my path to an early grave.

Take the time to open up your eyes.
You've been blinded, by your own design.
These tales we've written, will stand the test of time.
Our downfall was my demise.

My demise...

This is not the end, you'll see the face of vengeance staring you in the eyes.
No second chances to regret the choices you've made in your life.
Your life.
Your life.
Your life.

Burn the bridge that ties me to the past...

NolaFree810

who is playin the instruments?

sbs_will

I would be able to take it more seriously if you didnt rip off machine head.

Mike

*inb4 Bianca makes a smartass comment*

Mike

I would be able to take it more seriously if you didnt rip off machine head.

Yeah, I thought those first two lines looked familiar.

NolaFree810

I would be able to take it more seriously if you didnt rip off machine head.

lol my thoughts as well. halo
but it doesnt sound that bad except your mic sux

TheDevilsDreads

Besides the fact that you really need to work out some of your technical difficulties with the mic, it was actually pretty good.

Episode

Not a Machine Head rip-off. -_- I didn't even have that song in mind when writing this. Anyways, it's all me except for the Guitar.

Adam

lol people still use myspace.

Mike

I kind of like the riff, it's just hard to hear.

drinkwine732

Not really death-y either. Get some better recording equipment, lower the drums in the mix, wait for your guitarist to get better.

TheDevilsDreads

Wow, so people can't say "Call To Arms" anymore without being called a Machine Head rip off? fucking horse shit man.

NolaFree810

the first and second line sound extremely similar to machine head. fact.

OPP

Wow, so people can't say "Call To Arms" anymore without being called a Machine Head rip off? fucking horse shit man.

You're a Machine Head rip off.

Episode

Not really death-y either. Get some better recording equipment, lower the drums in the mix, wait for your guitarist to get better.

I don't have thousands of dollars for good recording shit. So I made due with what I have.

Mike

Wow, so people can't say "Call To Arms" anymore without being called a Machine Head rip off? fucking horse shit man.

Halo:
This is a call to arms,
Will you stand beside me?
This is our time to fight
No more compromising

Very similar. I'm not saying he "copied" the lyrics from Machine Head, it's just very similar.

1D_for_life

but it doesnt sound that bad except your mic sux

TheDevilsDreads

Wow, so people can't say "Call To Arms" anymore without being called a Machine Head rip off? fucking horse shit man.

You're a Machine Head rip off.

NO
YOU'RE A TOWEL

OPP

Wow, so people can't say "Call To Arms" anymore without being called a Machine Head rip off? fucking horse shit man.

You're a Machine Head rip off.

NO
YOU'RE A TOWEL

And if I am?

Episode

Well it's a Rock Band mic.... lol.

I used the same mic for the Drums. I'm surprised they turned out so good.

drinkwine732

Not really death-y either. Get some better recording equipment, lower the drums in the mix, wait for your guitarist to get better.

I don't have thousands of dollars for good recording shit. So I made due with what I have.

The main part I have a problem with is the guitar recording, nothing you did. Drums are okay, except too high in the mix. Them guitars need to be recorded with something better than a comp mic.

Also, grab a vocalist. Don't want to insult you, but it doesn't sound like it's your forté. The inhales are sounding unhealthy.