WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
i liked the second one
okay... I listened to that one. I'm not rap expert but I thought it was similar to most of his stuff. It's close to being really good, but there are times when the flow is off a little. Or maybe some of the words arent the best choice. I like the general feel of the song, I don't like that the voice that comes into harmonize a single word with Erik. It's weird... Off tone or something. overall I have positive vibes of it, but I think it needs to be rerecorded and done in collaboration with a real producer.
Comin' through like Sonic. My speed is so astronomic. I'm poppin' at 'em, I'm bombin', Im'ma drop it like an atomic. Try to keep up, and I'll leave you stupid and catatonic. Dangerous, catastrophic, superhuman, I'm bionic. I'm on it, economic, but I'll break you, so ironic. Gimme any track, and you already know that Im'ma rock it. Wizard spittin' magic, you all comin' shorter than The Hobbit. Gimme any beat, I'll add my potion, and go make a tonic. Fillin' up this track, too many syllables and phonics. Do it automatic, programmed to kill it, robotic. Fairly out of my mind, I am a little bit psychotic. Seize the fuckin' moment, yea, you know that Im'ma cop it. Fuck being sick, I am so ill, that I'm lymphonic. Fuck a goon, fuck a goblin, fuck 'em all, I am demonic. Thinkin' Im'ma stop, well I don't understand your logic. Flyin' so fast, I am commandin' the cockpit.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
HERE WE GO. Easily my best track, IMO. So stoked on this. This will be a full collab with my Cousin and Magek. This is my verse though.
That was the best one I've ever heard you do. My only criticism is it was only the first verse of a song. Where are the other two? Also... I thought the intro was a little longer then it needed to be, you should have dropped in earlier.
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From Those Fishes - I Fingered An Old Bitch (i got Aids on my finger)
Flows - WorldWide Choppers. by ErikBehemoth1357
Lyrics:
Comin' through like Sonic.
My speed is so astronomic.
I'm poppin' at 'em, I'm bombin', Im'ma drop it like an atomic.
Try to keep up, and I'll leave you stupid and catatonic.
Dangerous, catastrophic, superhuman, I'm bionic.
I'm on it, economic, but I'll break you, so ironic.
Gimme any track, and you already know that Im'ma rock it.
Wizard spittin' magic, you all comin' shorter than The Hobbit.
Gimme any beat, I'll add my potion, and go make a tonic.
Fillin' up this track, too many syllables and phonics.
Do it automatic, programmed to kill it, robotic.
Fairly out of my mind, I am a little bit psychotic.
Seize the fuckin' moment, yea, you know that Im'ma cop it.
Fuck being sick, I am so ill, that I'm lymphonic.
Fuck a goon, fuck a goblin, fuck 'em all, I am demonic.
Thinkin' Im'ma stop, well I don't understand your logic.
Flyin' so fast, I am commandin' the cockpit.