Yeah the production level is so much better. Like tenfold. As for the song itself I dont really like that type of shit but it sounded pretty good. One thing I noticed is you've stopped trying to reach those high notes and focused in a range you're more comfortable in which has also greatly improved the song quality imo.
^yeah, p much. As far as Rex's lyric comment, you're not rapping, so I'm not looking for word play and entendres and shit. It sounds fine for what you're going for. I'm just not too hot on R&B
As far as the rap bot thing I never said anything about the lyrics other then the song kills because of his flow. As far as your shit they are literally cringeworthy. Completely unoriginal and not creative at all. But like I said production level is miles better you should stick to doing beats.
Yeah the production level is so much better. Like tenfold. As for the song itself I dont really like that type of shit but it sounded pretty good. One thing I noticed is you've stopped trying to reach those high notes and focused in a range you're more comfortable in which has also greatly improved the song quality imo.
It's still pretty high but yea, I actually went over the track wit my vocal coach before I hit the studio, I was originally singing it a half step too high, so we ironed that out and this was the result. But thank you dawg. \m/
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CAUSE I AINT NO HOLLABACK GIRL
CRAAAWWWWLING IIINNNNN MYYYY SKIIIIIIIIIIINNNN
As promised, the 1st track from my 2nd mixtape, Elevator, "Supply The Night":
What in the fuck ...
Production level is getting better but fuck you need to work on your lyrical vocab. Shit is pure atrocious.
You defended "I rap like a robot so call me Rap-Bot". Your lyrical opinion is invalid. 8-|
but for me to rap like a computer, must be in my genes.
Erik, you're singing the hook and the last verse, right?
Yeah the production level is so much better. Like tenfold. As for the song itself I dont really like that type of shit but it sounded pretty good. One thing I noticed is you've stopped trying to reach those high notes and focused in a range you're more comfortable in which has also greatly improved the song quality imo.
^yeah, p much. As far as Rex's lyric comment, you're not rapping, so I'm not looking for word play and entendres and shit. It sounds fine for what you're going for. I'm just not too hot on R&B
As far as the rap bot thing I never said anything about the lyrics other then the song kills because of his flow. As far as your shit they are literally cringeworthy. Completely unoriginal and not creative at all. But like I said production level is miles better you should stick to doing beats.
Oh I'm sorry I forgot how original Metal lyrics are, completely different plain. 8-|
Drown.
Yea but who the fuck are you? Lmao I still haven't figured it out. Slap? :-?
>receives compliments
>focuses on detractor
smh
It's still pretty high but yea, I actually went over the track wit my vocal coach before I hit the studio, I was originally singing it a half step too high, so we ironed that out and this was the result. But thank you dawg. \m/
EpisodeElevator said:
Yeah