MY FIRST SONG!

Da_Muffinz

Hey everyone so this is literally the first song I've ever uploaded and I'm excited to share with you guys. It's an instrumental track we plan on having for our first demo. This is the semi-final product of the song since it's only the guitar tracks that have been recorded. We're getting the drum tracks in soon. So I'm the lead guitarist in the band, Brett does one solo at 2:43 and I do the main solo at 4:24. Please be honest and tell me what you think of how the current product sounds, and especially my solo work. I welcome criticism.

Enjoy! \m/

Chicken_Fucker

it sucks

Da_Muffinz

Well shit.

WakeOfAshes

CF is just being a dick. That was actually really good man. Are you going to write lyrics to that?

Da_Muffinz

WakeOfAshes said:

CF is just being a dick. That was actually really good man. Are you going to write lyrics to that?

Lol I figured as much. Thanks dude! No man it's strictly going to be an instrumental. The way the song is set up would be awkward to put lyrics in. Did you like my leads?
\m/

Chicken_Fucker

I'm innocent ]

Da_Muffinz

Chicken_Fucker said:

I'm innocent ]

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WakeOfAshes

Da_Muffinz said:

WakeOfAshes said:

CF is just being a dick. That was actually really good man. Are you going to write lyrics to that?

Lol I figured as much. Thanks dude! No man it's strictly going to be an instrumental. The way the song is set up would be awkward to put lyrics in. Did you like my leads?
\m/

yeah. I'm interested in hearing a non instrumental song though. No need to rush, just make sure you get me attention next time you post songs.

MetalCoresades

not bad.

interested in hearing it with other instruments and vocals though

Gnomez

I liked it muffintop - the solo was awesome
Have you got a hot singer?

Da_Muffinz

WakeOfAshes said:

Da_Muffinz said:

WakeOfAshes said:

CF is just being a dick. That was actually really good man. Are you going to write lyrics to that?

Lol I figured as much. Thanks dude! No man it's strictly going to be an instrumental. The way the song is set up would be awkward to put lyrics in. Did you like my leads?
\m/

yeah. I'm interested in hearing a non instrumental song though. No need to rush, just make sure you get me attention next time you post songs.

For sure dude. Thanks for your feedback.

Da_Muffinz

MetalCrusades said:

not bad.

interested in hearing it with other instruments and vocals though

Ah not a fan of instrumentals?

MenAreTrash

It sounded pretty good. There were a few moments when the lead and rhythm were totally not in time though.

Da_Muffinz

Gnomez said:

I liked it muffintop - the solo was awesome
Have you got a hot singer?

Hahaha thanks gnomezy. Nah Brett's the vocalist and rhythm guitar.

Da_Muffinz

slapguitarer said:

It sounded pretty good. There were a few moments when the lead and rhythm were totally not in time though.

Thanks dude. Which part of the song sounded out if time? I kind of have an idea as to where it might be.

MenAreTrash

It's in the first two minutes I think.

Da_Muffinz

slapguitarer said:

It's in the first two minutes I think.

Ah yes. Well the problem was Brett wanted me to slide into an octave higher for that lead section rather than me playing the same thing 4 times, so we wanted to change it up a bit and improvise, but he wanted that slide to be slow so it kinda sounds weird. Did you like the rest of the leads though?