Yea, and all you managed to do on your track was mention my Dad, be a racist, mention Tyler, and talk shit about me making it. Nice try. And the point of the line was that you use my Dad like I don't know about it, don't acknowledge it, or that it hurts me. Therefore, no dirt on me with that shit.
The hook is awful. You have good rap tone, you can't sing for shit though so it would be best if you didnt try shit like this again.
I liked the bass beat you had outside of the hook... Lyrically though this is just another one of your generic shit raps about how great you think you are. Reality check - No, you don't have more attitude then Eazy E. No you arent colder then Ice Cube. No you aren't as dope as Dre. You are however a 15 year old child who hasn't done shit, hasnt lived through shit, but likes to rap about how he made it like he was eminem, Dre, or Snoop. Rapping like that, wont get you anywhere.... keep it up.
Or..... Rap about shit that is real. How many times do I have to tell you that'd kill. always rapping about who you will be and never rapping about what you see.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
Lol, I see Wake took time out today to be a dedicated hater. Thanks for your time, means a lot, faggot.
nope. to be a hater, one has to hate. I don't hate you, so my comments are only constructive criticism. You just do a poor job of receiving negative feedback.
That's not constructive criticism. And nice to see you're hating yet again. And I'm not even gonna bother, because you're stupid as fuck and clearly don't know how to decipher Hip Hop lyrics, wordplay, metaphors, etc. Never said I have more attitude than Eazy E, the colder than Ice Cube line isn't literal, but you're stupid, think about his fucking name. And never said I'm more dope than Dre. Tha Chronic is an album of his, and the line was a reference to that as well as saying I'm literally as dope as...you guessed it! DOPE! Know what the fuck you're talking about before you hate on me and make yourself look fucking stupid.
oOh, and I've also never rapped about how I made it. I rap about how I WANT to make it and work towards it. Once again, actually KNOW what the fuck you're talking about, dumbass.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
Not understanding basic vocabulary is something I can give you a pass on because you are still a child. However I will help you with this vocabulary so you don't make the same mistake in the future.
"Constructive criticism" is criticism that has a goal of improving some area of another’s person’s life or work. Had I said "Your rap is complete garbage", that is not "constructive criticism" but just "criticism". What in "Your rap is complete garbage" gives you input to help improve your work? Nothing. However if I said "Your rap is complete garbage, because it is so focused on who you will be and not on who you are". This statement is also "criticism" however is there words in there that give you input on how you could make it better? YES. you could take the input of "don't focus on who I will be, but on what I am". So that "criticism" is actually "constructive criticism", because the person writing is not just saying it is garbage but telling you how it could be made better.
You fail at receiving "constructive criticism". Do you have to agree with others input of your work? No. Any one person can be just as wrong as you might be. However if you get a larger sample size then just 1, and that sample size is echoing the same thing, then perhaps you should reflect on that input more, and possibly revise the direction of your work. Unless you don't want your work to be successful (judging by your raps though, I doubt that is the case)
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
oOh, and I've also never rapped about how I made it. I rap about how I WANT to make it and work towards it. Once again, actually KNOW what the fuck you're talking about, dumbass.
But no one (besides you) gives a flying fuck if you WANT to make it. Everyone WANTS to make it. You think people sit around going "yeah... I'm happy making minimum wage and being shit on. im a loser and ill always be one". NO. everyone WANTS to make it. Everyone wants to be someone and wants their work to matter.... But people don't want to listen to bullshit about how you specifically WANT to make it. Tell me something I dont know.
fucking rap about shit that isnt what you WANT, but what you are currently doing.
Well, it's not constructive criticism, but since you think it is, leave your "constructive criticism" on a subject you just proved to have no clue about, to yourself, save the time and effort, and stick to Metal, old man.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
Well, it's not constructive criticism, but since you think it is, leave your "constructive criticism" on a subject you just proved to have no clue about, to yourself, save the time and effort, and stick to Metal, old man.
just because you dont personally agree with the constructive input, doesnt make the input not constructive.
Aight sure, and this constructive criticism is on something you have no clue about, so it's equally as worthless to me. This is the same shit as if I went to NASA and told them what to change on their blueprints for a rocket ship. It's something I have not the slightest clue about.
WakeOfAshesPosts: 21,665destroyer of motherfuckers
Aight sure, and this constructive criticism is on something you have no clue about, so it's equally as worthless to me. This is the same shit as if I went to NASA and told them what to change on their blueprints for a rocket ship. It's something I have not the slightest clue about.
so what? I never claimed to be an expert on raps. Nor have I ever claimed that I was an expert on music. You put your work out there, which invites people to give their opinion of it. I give my opinion of your work, but try and make it constructive because I think you have some talent.
My opinion wrong? Maybe. Depends on what you consider wrong. If your intent is to get famous making records like Eminem, Dre, Snoop, etc.... Then the person that is wrong, is the person whose opinion differs more from the majority of people who like that music. Could your opinion of your work be wrong? Yes, if your intent is to get famous and sell a lot of records. Is your opinion or my opinion wrong? I dont fucking know... the sample size is much too small, and I am only barely interested in rap. It doesnt make my differing opinion worthless though. It should just be received by you as a data point on opinions of your work.
Yea, and all you managed to do on your track was mention my Dad, be a racist, mention Tyler, and talk shit about me making it. Nice try. And the point of the line was that you use my Dad like I don't know about it, don't acknowledge it, or that it hurts me. Therefore, no dirt on me with that shit.
I mentioned your homeschooling, delusions, Tyler, your fake label, the other forum making fun of you for the same reasons we did (even though they are far superior), your BB gun picture, your repeated themes of you "going to make it", the DESTROYED a motherfucker thread, your "yeah fuck haters everyone else is wrong" attitude, and I called you gay.
I did not, however, mention your dad.
TUPAC IS DEAD/THE LEGEND IS GONE/THEY SAYIN TUPAC'S BACK?/DEM NIGGAS WRONG
Yea, and all you managed to do on your track was mention my Dad, be a racist, mention Tyler, and talk shit about me making it. Nice try. And the point of the line was that you use my Dad like I don't know about it, don't acknowledge it, or that it hurts me. Therefore, no dirt on me with that shit.
I mentioned your homeschooling, delusions, Tyler, your fake label, the other forum making fun of you for the same reasons we did (even though they are far superior), your BB gun picture, your repeated themes of you "going to make it", the DESTROYED a motherfucker thread, your "yeah fuck haters everyone else is wrong" attitude, and I called you gay.
Yea, and all you managed to do on your track was mention my Dad, be a racist, mention Tyler, and talk shit about me making it. Nice try. And the point of the line was that you use my Dad like I don't know about it, don't acknowledge it, or that it hurts me. Therefore, no dirt on me with that shit.
I mentioned your homeschooling, delusions, Tyler, your fake label, the other forum making fun of you for the same reasons we did (even though they are far superior), your BB gun picture, your repeated themes of you "going to make it", the DESTROYED a motherfucker thread, your "yeah fuck haters everyone else is wrong" attitude, and I called you gay.
I did not, however, mention your dad.
Label's not fake you piece of shit. Minor label doesn't equal fake. You jelly because your piece of shit noise band will never be picked up by even a minor label?
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Isn't this exactly what I said to you, but reversed? I said you didn't have any dirt on me so all you kept saying is my dad died. Nice try.
I liked the bass beat you had outside of the hook... Lyrically though this is just another one of your generic shit raps about how great you think you are. Reality check - No, you don't have more attitude then Eazy E. No you arent colder then Ice Cube. No you aren't as dope as Dre. You are however a 15 year old child who hasn't done shit, hasnt lived through shit, but likes to rap about how he made it like he was eminem, Dre, or Snoop. Rapping like that, wont get you anywhere.... keep it up.
Or..... Rap about shit that is real.
How many times do I have to tell you that'd kill.
always rapping about who you will be
and never rapping about what you see.
"Constructive criticism" is criticism that has a goal of improving some area of another’s person’s life or work. Had I said "Your rap is complete garbage", that is not "constructive criticism" but just "criticism". What in "Your rap is complete garbage" gives you input to help improve your work? Nothing. However if I said "Your rap is complete garbage, because it is so focused on who you will be and not on who you are". This statement is also "criticism" however is there words in there that give you input on how you could make it better? YES. you could take the input of "don't focus on who I will be, but on what I am". So that "criticism" is actually "constructive criticism", because the person writing is not just saying it is garbage but telling you how it could be made better.
You fail at receiving "constructive criticism". Do you have to agree with others input of your work? No. Any one person can be just as wrong as you might be. However if you get a larger sample size then just 1, and that sample size is echoing the same thing, then perhaps you should reflect on that input more, and possibly revise the direction of your work. Unless you don't want your work to be successful (judging by your raps though, I doubt that is the case)
fucking rap about shit that isnt what you WANT, but what you are currently doing.
My opinion wrong? Maybe. Depends on what you consider wrong. If your intent is to get famous making records like Eminem, Dre, Snoop, etc.... Then the person that is wrong, is the person whose opinion differs more from the majority of people who like that music. Could your opinion of your work be wrong? Yes, if your intent is to get famous and sell a lot of records. Is your opinion or my opinion wrong? I dont fucking know... the sample size is much too small, and I am only barely interested in rap. It doesnt make my differing opinion worthless though. It should just be received by you as a data point on opinions of your work.
Now hop off the cock, you old faggot insect.
*edit* forgot to call you a metalhead. My bad.
I did not, however, mention your dad.