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New Flow.
Over the Black And Yellow Instrumental, let me know what you think.
Black And Yellow Freestyle by ErikBehemoth1357
Lyrics:
I step up to the plate.
I break my fuckin' bat.
Just like I break the barriers.
Yea, you could check my stats.
I won the marathon, and you just joggin' laps.
Keep on poppin' bottles, Im'ma pop a fuckin' bottle cap.
I rock an Era cap, era of a champion.
Keep on fishin' for success, go ahead and cast me in.
Ha, I'm shinin' brighter than a solar beam.
Hotter than the sun so Im'ma keep on blowin' off some steam.
Yea, it may all seem like just a pipe dream, tunnel vision nightmares of a do or die go lucky scheme.
Yo, I lead my army like the Joan Of Arc.
Drop the match, light the spark.
Devil on my left, so he's the one that I be rolling with.
Piss the world off, because I really never gave a shit.
The hate just kept me fighting, define the word exciting, 'cause to me, it's this violent riot of rhymes that I'm inciting.
It's undying, this wish to be all the way at the top.
And the battle will never end, not until this dying heart stops.
Never giving up on this dream, it's my reality.
I'm taking over the game, yea, just fucking wait and see.
I don't really know where I am going with my life.
But I'll continue to bite the bullet and keep on crawling through the knives.
And I just never wanna hear a fuckin' thing about my past, it's out of sight.
And I just wanna look ahead to a new light.
Now I'm in flight, I'm flyin' above those that degraded me.
I used to have true friends, but then they went and fucking traded me.
I'm fucking pissed, and at this point, there is no saving me.
So Im'ma stay true to this Music, it's my one safe haven, B.
Black And Yellow Freestyle by ErikBehemoth1357
Lyrics:
I step up to the plate.
I break my fuckin' bat.
Just like I break the barriers.
Yea, you could check my stats.
I won the marathon, and you just joggin' laps.
Keep on poppin' bottles, Im'ma pop a fuckin' bottle cap.
I rock an Era cap, era of a champion.
Keep on fishin' for success, go ahead and cast me in.
Ha, I'm shinin' brighter than a solar beam.
Hotter than the sun so Im'ma keep on blowin' off some steam.
Yea, it may all seem like just a pipe dream, tunnel vision nightmares of a do or die go lucky scheme.
Yo, I lead my army like the Joan Of Arc.
Drop the match, light the spark.
Devil on my left, so he's the one that I be rolling with.
Piss the world off, because I really never gave a shit.
The hate just kept me fighting, define the word exciting, 'cause to me, it's this violent riot of rhymes that I'm inciting.
It's undying, this wish to be all the way at the top.
And the battle will never end, not until this dying heart stops.
Never giving up on this dream, it's my reality.
I'm taking over the game, yea, just fucking wait and see.
I don't really know where I am going with my life.
But I'll continue to bite the bullet and keep on crawling through the knives.
And I just never wanna hear a fuckin' thing about my past, it's out of sight.
And I just wanna look ahead to a new light.
Now I'm in flight, I'm flyin' above those that degraded me.
I used to have true friends, but then they went and fucking traded me.
I'm fucking pissed, and at this point, there is no saving me.
So Im'ma stay true to this Music, it's my one safe haven, B.
Comments
Other than that I will listen when I can steal wifi from someone.
The lyric "joggin' laps" maybe could/should be changed to "loggin' laps" that's more of a well known saying when it comes to any form of racing, whether it's racing cars, bikes, or running.
They way you currently have it works but I think it may sound a bit better if it were loggin' laps instead of joggin' laps
I don't have a problem with your rhymes either, except you sounded tired the entire third verse and you mention the Era cap. Fix dat shit.
Solid though, solid.
EDIT:
I personally prefer joggin' laps. It sounds lazier.
Thank you though. \m/
Thanx yooz. >:D<
Joggin' fits though since it's referring to a running marathon.
Ew don't hug me homo. Lolz JK, thank you brah. \m/
How queer...I guess it will remain a mystery.
Like Bruce Buffer its time to start the bloodbath
If you don't like my flow you can kiss my shaft
Every time Erik opens his mouth I laugh
2 more hits of chron and ya can't stop me
In b4 some grammar nazi
Starts proof reading through my shjt
i don geeva phuc so stay of my tip
You can hold my balls while I rock this shit
Bouncing off the walls when I smoke this shit
I wont answer your calls so you can't cop that shit
If Eric finds Bianca, I bet he slaps that bitch
Christ knows, someone needs to
Continue the blows till she bleeds though
Wrap her in a sheet, no one sees you
Useless bitch, no one needs you
"Jobe that wasn't nice, imma tell the mods on you
cuz the things you say just aint true
I'm gonna over react and come unglued
You're in big trouble when the mods come through"
<_>
Fuck you i already beat him to it
And if you don't like it you better get used to it
Go ahead, get your panties all twisted
Its not my fault you like getting fisted
Past the rim and into the colon
Up to the elbow till its all swollen
A quick spit lube and we keep going
Getting nasty now, all the way up to the dental
Did you want that picture in your mental?
Too fucking bad because its there now
Anybody else wanna share now?
So allow me to follow forum procedure
"Jobe, that rap was simply awful
You need to stop you fucking twat waffle
You spelled shit wrong and the beats were off
Your flow is weak and your rhymes were soft"
Eric comes in and talks shit again
Spazzing out cuz he needs some ritalin
Bianca comes in being a bitch again
And a Jay Face from Lower Michigan
Jeff can't find his dick cuz he's too fat to see
Katia's vag is still a catastrophe
Shane comes in trollin half of yee
Please no more pics of Judy takin it anally
Dirtball shows up smokin half a tree
Distance tells Catz stay away from me
There's a sex offender here, and its not Primus
Its teh creepy little cat beside us
And that's the way the forum has to be
Dont get pissed, its bad for your health
Don't mind me, I'm just entaining myself
If you got left out, its a drag son
Probably cuz I think you're a fag like Magson