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TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
edited February 2010 in Off Topic
lol ok so im not drunk yet but its almost 3 am and im bored i got 6 beer and im a light weight drunkness will ensew shortly. happy valentines day everyone what are you doing with your lovers?
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  • NecrothulhuNecrothulhu Posts: 33,444 master of ceremonies
    w000!!! drunkeness =P
    And not much
    I has restrictions =/
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  • TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
    restrictions?!?!! how so lol
    me and my girlfriend (sorry ladies i know its hard to accept) and i are just gonna be hanging out cuddling. no sex for me cuz shes on the rag. im writing her a song as we speak :)
  • NecrothulhuNecrothulhu Posts: 33,444 master of ceremonies
    Awww, that's so sweet =]
    And it's long-distance
    That tis' the restriction atm
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  • JLRedWing13JLRedWing13 Posts: 48,738 mod
    edited February 2010
    Celebrating my singleness. <_> Have fun Julian.
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  • TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
    edited February 2010
    lmao im always having fun. and Jaycup youre never alone bud. singleness is but an idea of the mind. figure thatshit out

    Dawn long distance relationships are hard but i mean if you can make em work then they can be better then other relationships
  • TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
    Voice Of Paradise

    A heart of ice and stone
    In this world of faceless voices
    A fear of loneliness and amnesia
    The voice of paradise coerces
    Not alone

    I was left in ashes
    Every limb broken and fractured
    Locked inside a rotting cell
    It was void of warmth and light
    Reflection of my soul, endless night
    Separated from love and affection
    The world inside me crashes

    The infection is spreading
    Through my veins, where's it heading?
    My heart, my lungs, my brain
    Consume me wholly, no more pain

    Two years of self-inflicted sorrow
    I broke every vow, sold my hopes of tomorrow
    Bitterness take me, I'm drowning in a rage
    A hollow existance, life became a cage
    Sadness had taken me, I degrated to hate
    Disgust clouded my vision and permeated into every day
    No matter the weather, the skies were a permanent gray

    The infection is spreading
    Through my veins, where's it heading?
    My heart, my lungs, my brain
    Consume me wholly, no more pain

    All hope was beyond me
    The voice of paradise set me free
    Your light disintegrated every shred of negativity
    Now I face the world in a new way
    The many shades of gray disolved
    The faceless voices all become resolved
    For every day we have, I am grateful
    Never with you could I be hateful

    The infection is spreading
    Through my veins, where's it heading?
    My heart, my lungs, my brain
    Consume me wholly, no more pain

    Your voice soothes my savagery
    It rends me away from being angry
    Your voice has saved me innumerable times
    It has been the inspiration for thousands of lines
    My heartbeat stumbles and my breathing doubles
    For your Voice of Paradise

    The love is spreading
    Through my veins, where's it heading?
    My heart, my lungs, my brain
    Consume me wholly, no more pain

    By Julian Sweet
  • JLRedWing13JLRedWing13 Posts: 48,738 mod
    Eh, I was working on it, but I've hit a road bump. <_>
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  • TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
    edited February 2010
    dont go fast over roadbumps man you can hit your head on the roof

    2 down 4 to go
  • EpisodeEpisode Posts: 32,049 destroyer of motherfuckers
    Those are some amazing lyrics Julian. I don't like the chorus though. Haha.
  • NecrothulhuNecrothulhu Posts: 33,444 master of ceremonies
    That's some damn good song writing
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  • TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
    thank you both its the first song ive written in like 3months so i was very surprised at how well it turned out lol

    i dont like the chorus either, the meaning is right but the words for it are totally wrong but i dont know the right words for it so those will have to do.
  • BrianBrian Posts: 17,611 destroyer of motherfuckers
    edited February 2010
    Here's an edit I made that you can use if you want in the chorus

    Your infection is spreading
    As I stop my regretting
    My heart, my lungs, my brain
    Consume me wholly, no more pain


    idk, I think it flows better. Hopefully its not too late.
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  • ZmbieFlavrdCupcakesZmbieFlavrdCupcakes Posts: 32,259 jayfacer
    im with dawn
    she knows :/
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  • TheDevilsDreadsTheDevilsDreads Posts: 1,625 just the tip
    edited February 2010
    the thing about the chorus is that i want it to sound like its about death until the song itself talks about love. so i like what you did brian but im gonna change it too

    The infection is spreading
    So I stop regretting
    My heart, My lungs, My brain
    Consume me wholly, no more pain
  • BrianBrian Posts: 17,611 destroyer of motherfuckers
    ah ok.


    but you kept the regretting part! w00tzorz!!!
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  • ShaneShane Posts: 15,229 balls deep
  • sbs_willsbs_will Posts: 18,648 salt miner
    fuck valentines day.


    I haz been single for almost 3 yearz now I think
  • AdamAdam Posts: 11,533 balls deep
    Valentines day is overrated as fuck.
  • sbs_willsbs_will Posts: 18,648 salt miner
    edited February 2010
    ^troof.


    nobody ever gives me valentines anyway.


    and my friend says "valentimes", and thats almost more annoying then the actual holiday.
  • MikeMike Posts: 7,820 admin
    It's just a corporate holiday to bring in more money.
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