lol ok so im not drunk yet but its almost 3 am and im bored i got 6 beer and im a light weight drunkness will ensew shortly. happy valentines day everyone what are you doing with your lovers?
restrictions?!?!! how so lol me and my girlfriend (sorry ladies i know its hard to accept) and i are just gonna be hanging out cuddling. no sex for me cuz shes on the rag. im writing her a song as we speak
A heart of ice and stone In this world of faceless voices A fear of loneliness and amnesia The voice of paradise coerces Not alone
I was left in ashes Every limb broken and fractured Locked inside a rotting cell It was void of warmth and light Reflection of my soul, endless night Separated from love and affection The world inside me crashes
The infection is spreading Through my veins, where's it heading? My heart, my lungs, my brain Consume me wholly, no more pain
Two years of self-inflicted sorrow I broke every vow, sold my hopes of tomorrow Bitterness take me, I'm drowning in a rage A hollow existance, life became a cage Sadness had taken me, I degrated to hate Disgust clouded my vision and permeated into every day No matter the weather, the skies were a permanent gray
The infection is spreading Through my veins, where's it heading? My heart, my lungs, my brain Consume me wholly, no more pain
All hope was beyond me The voice of paradise set me free Your light disintegrated every shred of negativity Now I face the world in a new way The many shades of gray disolved The faceless voices all become resolved For every day we have, I am grateful Never with you could I be hateful
The infection is spreading Through my veins, where's it heading? My heart, my lungs, my brain Consume me wholly, no more pain
Your voice soothes my savagery It rends me away from being angry Your voice has saved me innumerable times It has been the inspiration for thousands of lines My heartbeat stumbles and my breathing doubles For your Voice of Paradise
The love is spreading Through my veins, where's it heading? My heart, my lungs, my brain Consume me wholly, no more pain
thank you both its the first song ive written in like 3months so i was very surprised at how well it turned out lol
i dont like the chorus either, the meaning is right but the words for it are totally wrong but i dont know the right words for it so those will have to do.
the thing about the chorus is that i want it to sound like its about death until the song itself talks about love. so i like what you did brian but im gonna change it too
The infection is spreading So I stop regretting My heart, My lungs, My brain Consume me wholly, no more pain
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And not much
I has restrictions =/
me and my girlfriend (sorry ladies i know its hard to accept) and i are just gonna be hanging out cuddling. no sex for me cuz shes on the rag. im writing her a song as we speak
And it's long-distance
That tis' the restriction atm
Dawn long distance relationships are hard but i mean if you can make em work then they can be better then other relationships
A heart of ice and stone
In this world of faceless voices
A fear of loneliness and amnesia
The voice of paradise coerces
Not alone
I was left in ashes
Every limb broken and fractured
Locked inside a rotting cell
It was void of warmth and light
Reflection of my soul, endless night
Separated from love and affection
The world inside me crashes
The infection is spreading
Through my veins, where's it heading?
My heart, my lungs, my brain
Consume me wholly, no more pain
Two years of self-inflicted sorrow
I broke every vow, sold my hopes of tomorrow
Bitterness take me, I'm drowning in a rage
A hollow existance, life became a cage
Sadness had taken me, I degrated to hate
Disgust clouded my vision and permeated into every day
No matter the weather, the skies were a permanent gray
The infection is spreading
Through my veins, where's it heading?
My heart, my lungs, my brain
Consume me wholly, no more pain
All hope was beyond me
The voice of paradise set me free
Your light disintegrated every shred of negativity
Now I face the world in a new way
The many shades of gray disolved
The faceless voices all become resolved
For every day we have, I am grateful
Never with you could I be hateful
The infection is spreading
Through my veins, where's it heading?
My heart, my lungs, my brain
Consume me wholly, no more pain
Your voice soothes my savagery
It rends me away from being angry
Your voice has saved me innumerable times
It has been the inspiration for thousands of lines
My heartbeat stumbles and my breathing doubles
For your Voice of Paradise
The love is spreading
Through my veins, where's it heading?
My heart, my lungs, my brain
Consume me wholly, no more pain
By Julian Sweet
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i dont like the chorus either, the meaning is right but the words for it are totally wrong but i dont know the right words for it so those will have to do.
Your infection is spreading
As I stop my regretting
My heart, my lungs, my brain
Consume me wholly, no more pain
idk, I think it flows better. Hopefully its not too late.
she knows
The infection is spreading
So I stop regretting
My heart, My lungs, My brain
Consume me wholly, no more pain
but you kept the regretting part! w00tzorz!!!
I haz been single for almost 3 yearz now I think
nobody ever gives me valentines anyway.
and my friend says "valentimes", and thats almost more annoying then the actual holiday.