Ordering pizza with my dad consists of first pitching the idea for pizza, figuring out where we want it from and what we want and ordering it...the whole process takes less than five minutes
Ordering pizza with my mom consists of figuring out at some point in the day that we're going to have pizza, then my mom looking through all the coupons we have and finally finding one, then noticing that it's expired. Finally she'll call every pizza place in a 10 mile radius to see what the specials are. If she doesn't like what she's hearing, she'll continue to dig for coupons. Finally we have to decide "Well there's a large specialty for $10, or an x-large two item for $11" If you pick it up we don't have to worry about paying for delivery. "Let me check a couple more places"
This and the conclusion are going to be the only two challenging paragraphs for me anyways, because they're the only ones I don't have outlined already.
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Ordering pizza with my mom consists of figuring out at some point in the day that we're going to have pizza, then my mom looking through all the coupons we have and finally finding one, then noticing that it's expired. Finally she'll call every pizza place in a 10 mile radius to see what the specials are. If she doesn't like what she's hearing, she'll continue to dig for coupons. Finally we have to decide "Well there's a large specialty for $10, or an x-large two item for $11" If you pick it up we don't have to worry about paying for delivery. "Let me check a couple more places"
although your point is still valid...
/spoiler
:-&
Readability:
Passive Sentences - 0%
Flesch Reading Ease - 30.9
Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level - 16.4
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This and the conclusion are going to be the only two challenging paragraphs for me anyways, because they're the only ones I don't have outlined already.